Budget Breakdown Artifact

Auto-structured from the screenplay into scene cards optimized for early budgeting conversations: where the expensive pressure points appear, how often they recur, and which scenes likely need closer line-by-line manual verification.

Scenes
185
Pages
100
Marine / ship scenes
99
Water / underwater scenes
57
High-pressure scenes
74
Top signal
Marine / ship work

Producer heatmap

Script-wide production pressure

This layer gives producers a top-down view of where the operational weight of the script sits before going scene-by-scene. It complements the scene cards by showing which departments and cost drivers dominate the script overall.

Aircraft / aerial sequence Medium pressure
37 scenes
Marine / ship work High pressure
99 scenes
Water / underwater work High pressure
57 scenes
FX / explosions / fire Medium pressure
37 scenes
Animal / shark Focused pressure
25 scenes
Stunts / action choreography Medium pressure
34 scenes
Weapons / armaments Medium pressure
32 scenes
Supporting cast / extras High pressure
73 scenes
Period wardrobe / props High pressure
51 scenes
High pressure Medium pressure Focused but contained

Top recurring budget flags

  • Marine / ship work99 scenes
  • Supporting cast / extras73 scenes
  • Water / underwater work57 scenes
  • Period wardrobe / props51 scenes
  • FX / explosions / fire37 scenes
  • Aircraft / aerial sequence37 scenes
  • Stunts / action choreography34 scenes
  • Weapons / armaments32 scenes
  • Desert exterior28 scenes
  • Animal / shark25 scenes

Most used locations / sets

  • RED SEA15 scenes
  • HULL13 scenes
  • UNDERWATER13 scenes
  • SKIES9 scenes
  • SPITFIRE COCKPIT8 scenes
  • KITCHEN8 scenes
  • RAFT8 scenes
  • GERMAN AIRBASE7 scenes
  • STORE ROOM7 scenes
  • MESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT6 scenes
  • BRITISH BASE6 scenes
  • SS JARROW6 scenes

Primary cast presence (rough pass)

Ray · 107 scenesJurgen · 79 scenesNeal · 29 scenesRob · 24 scenesKommandant · 4 scenesPamela · 4 scenesFirst Officer · 3 scenesCatherine · 3 scenesColonel Blundell · 2 scenes

Scene cards

185 total
Scene 001 • p.2

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
Cast

A cargo steamship sails through the pristine waters of the Red Sea. In the far distance - twenty miles off the ship’s starboard side - we can see the closest land...

Marine / ship workDesert exterior
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 002 • p.2

EXT. SS THISTLEGORM - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS THISTLEGORM
Cast

The four hundred foot long boat is packed with wartime cargo. Most of it - all the munitions and armaments - are in the hold...

Marine / ship workDesert exteriorFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsMotorcycles / vehiclesAA gun / weapons
Scene 003 • p.2

EXT. SKIES - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSKIES
Cast

A Heinkel 111 twin engined Luftwaffe bomber flies high above the desert towards the sea. A wing of six Messerschmidt 109s flies in formation behind the bomber.

Desert exteriorAircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / firePeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesMesserschmidtsHeinkel bomber
Scene 004 • p.2

EXT. SS THISTLEGORM - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS THISTLEGORM
Cast

The forward anti aircraft gunner scans the skies with a pair of binoculars. He tenses when he spots something high above.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesSpitfiresCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weapons
Scene 005 • p.2

INT. SPITFIRE COCKPIT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSPITFIRE COCKPIT
CastRay

We’re inside the surprisingly rudimentary cockpit of the lead Spitfire. At the controls is Squadron Leader RAY THORNTON.

Water / underwater workAircraft / aerial sequenceStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesSpitfires
Scene 006 • p.3

INT. MESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationMESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT
CastRay, Jurgen

Obersleutnant JURGEN FRIEDL is commanding the Luftwaffe fighter escort. Like his British counterpart he also has he name and rank painted beneath the cockpit along with a line of ‘kills’ that’s even longer than Ray’s.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesMesserschmidts
Scene 007 • p.4

EXT. SS THISTLEGORM - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS THISTLEGORM
Cast

The anti aircraft gunners on the cargo ship see the events unfolding in the skies above and open fire. The huge exploding shells leave puffs of black smoke against the flawless blue of the sky.

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weapons
Scene 008 • p.4

EXT. SKIES - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSKIES
CastRay

Ray opens up with his dual Browning machine guns... The rest of the squadron follow suit before fanning out to pursue the enemy aircraft.

Weapons / armamentsPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesAA gun / weapons
Scene 009 • p.4

EXT. AIR BATTLE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationAIR BATTLE
Cast

Both sets of planes are performing complex aerobatic maneuvers in order to place themselves directly behind one of the enemy planes. One of the Messerschmidts executes a textbook barrel roll to escape the withering fire from the pursuing Spitfire’s machine gun.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidtsAA gun / weaponsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 010 • p.4

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
CastRay

Ray is traveling at close to 400mph about 20 feet about the sea. He screams past the SS Thistlegorm - so close that the men on deck are caught in turbulence of his wake.

Marine / ship workAircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesHeinkel bomberCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 011 • p.5

INT. HEINKEL BOMBER - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationHEINKEL BOMBER
Cast

The nose gunner takes aim at the Sprifire screaming towards them. He fires.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesSpitfiresHeinkel bomber
Scene 012 • p.5

INT. SPITFIRE COCKPIT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSPITFIRE COCKPIT
CastRay

Ray’s POV as his machine gun fire finally strikes home - hitting the bombs before they’re released. They explode and the Heinkel turns into a fireball.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armaments
Key budget cuesSpitfiresHeinkel bomberAA gun / weapons
Scene 013 • p.5

EXT. SKIES - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSKIES
CastRay

Ray’s Spitfire emerges unscathed. Almost immediately one of the Messerschmidts dives towards him.

Water / underwater workAircraft / aerial sequenceStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidts
Scene 014 • p.5

EXT. AIR BATTLE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationAIR BATTLE
Cast

It’s a maelstrom up here. Dogfights are breaking out everywhere.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidtsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 015 • p.6

INT. SPITFIRE COCKPIT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationSPITFIRE COCKPIT
Cast

The Spitfire pilot is ready to press the ‘fire’ button when a second Messerschmidt drops right in behind him.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidts
Scene 016 • p.6

INT. MESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationMESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT
CastJurgen

Jurgen is flying the plane that just dropped in behind the Spitfire (a classic ‘sandwich’ move in dogfighting). He opens fire.

Desert exteriorAircraft / aerial sequenceStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidts
Scene 017 • p.6

INT. SPITFIRE COCKPIT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationSPITFIRE COCKPIT
CastRay

Ray is diving towards the engagement... He sees the Spitfire go down...

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidtsHeinkel bomberCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 018 • p.7

EXT. DESERT RAF AIRBASE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationDESERT RAF AIRBASE
CastRay, Engineer

The Spitfires land on a makeshift airstrip in the middle of the desert. Although it counts as an RAF base - in fact it consists of little more than a row of tents and a series of low fortified bunkers filled with fuel and munitions.

Desert exteriorAircraft / aerial sequenceStunts / action choreographyPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesSpitfires
Scene 019 • p.8

INT. TENT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationTENT
CastRay

Ray ducks inside one of the sand colored tents. The spartan interior contains a camp bed with carefully folded sheets and blankets, an oil lamp, a hard back copy of Aldous Huxley’s “Brave New World”, a shaving kit, a spare uniform and a knapsack.

Marine / ship workDesert exteriorPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 020 • p.8

EXT. GERMAN AIRBASE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationGERMAN AIRBASE
CastJurgen, Kommandant, Mechanic

Jurgen climbs out of the cockpit of his Messerschmidt. The German base in the middle of the desert is larger than the British one...

Desert exteriorAircraft / aerial sequenceSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesMesserschmidts
Scene 021 • p.9

INT. KOMMANDANT’S TENT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationKOMMANDANT’S TENT
CastJurgen, Kommandant

The camp’s kommandant is a thin faced, oily, bureaucrat... sitting at a desk wearing full Nazi uniform.

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 022 • p.10

Intelligence. Is that what you call it?

Type
Time
LocationIntelligence. Is that what you call it?
CastJurgen, Kommandant

The kommandant rises... red faced.

Desert exteriorStunts / action choreographyPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 023 • p.10

INT. TENT - AFTERNOON

TypeINT
TimeAFTERNOON
LocationTENT
CastRay

Ray enters a tent that has been turned into a makeshift chapel. There is a lectern and guttering candles - but nobody else in here.

Stunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 024 • p.11

INT. GERMAN MESS TENT - EVENING

TypeINT
TimeEVENING
LocationGERMAN MESS TENT
Cast

The German pilots are seated around long wooden tables. There is a large portrait of the Fuhrer on the tent wall.

Supporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 025 • p.11

INT. BRITISH MESS TENT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationBRITISH MESS TENT
CastRay

Ray takes his seat in the virtually identical British mess tent. Despite the loss of one of their pilots the buzz of conversation is more animated than among their German counterparts.

Supporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 026 • p.11

INT. GERMAN MESS TENT - EVENING

TypeINT
TimeEVENING
LocationGERMAN MESS TENT
CastJurgen

Jurgen assesses the mood of the room. He leaves his meal unfinished and rises.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cues
Scene 027 • p.12

into Egypt.

Type
Time
Locationinto Egypt.
CastJurgen

There are cheers now as Jurgen winds up to a crescendo. There will always be setbacks...

Desert exteriorSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 028 • p.13

INT. BRITISH MESS TENT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationBRITISH MESS TENT
CastRay, Chaplain

From the rousing German anthem we cut to dead silence in the British mess. Everyone is standing.

Supporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 029 • p.13

EXT. BRITISH BASE - EVENING

TypeEXT
TimeEVENING
LocationBRITISH BASE
Cast

The singing continues as we see a desert wind whip up sand that swirls around the row of Spitfires.

Desert exteriorAircraft / aerial sequence
Key budget cuesSpitfires
Scene 030 • p.13

EXT. GERMAN AIRBASE - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationGERMAN AIRBASE
Cast

Less than a hundred miles away the row of Messerschmmidts gleam in the moonlight. UNISON (CONT’D)

Desert exterior
Key budget cues
Scene 031 • p.14

INT. BRITISH MESS TENT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationBRITISH MESS TENT
Cast

The singing reaches its patriotic climax.

Stunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 032 • p.14

EXT. PORT - EARLY MORNING

TypeEXT
TimeEARLY MORNING
LocationPORT
CastRob, Neal

A British cargo ship is refueling in the port of Djibuti in Eritrea. Like the Thistlegorm it is packed with cargo heading north to help the war effort.

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fire
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 033 • p.15

EXT. GERMAN AIRBASE - MORNING

TypeEXT
TimeMORNING
LocationGERMAN AIRBASE
CastJurgen, Mechanic

Jurgen is helping two mechanics push an older model Messerschmidt out of the hangar. They stop when it’s alongside another plane.

Desert exteriorAircraft / aerial sequenceWeapons / armamentsSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesMesserschmidts
Scene 034 • p.16

EXT. BRITISH BASE - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationBRITISH BASE
CastRay, Colonel Blundell

Ray is sitting outside his tent. He’s at a low table writing a letter.

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fireSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesHeinkel bomberCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 035 • p.16

intelligence.

Type
Time
Locationintelligence.
CastColonel Blundell, Ray

Using a code we know they’ve broken. But it won’t be long before they figure it out...

Key budget cues
Scene 036 • p.17

EXT. DJIBUTI PORT - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationDJIBUTI PORT
Cast

The SS JARROW is about to leave. The mooring lines are being removed from the dock cleats and winched back onboard.

Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 037 • p.17

INT. SHIP’S MESS - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationSHIP’S MESS
CastNeal, Rob

Rob and Neal are mopping the floor of the cavernous mess hall. The rows of long wooden tables and benches have been bolted to the floor.

Marine / ship workStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 038 • p.18

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationKITCHEN
CastRob

They lug the wooden crate through the large kitchen. Apart from the row of basins and the large metal work surface, there are two giant refrigerators in here as well as a long gas cooker.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater work
Key budget cuesJerry cans / supplies
Scene 039 • p.18

EXT. BRITISH BASE - EARLY EVENING

TypeEXT
TimeEARLY EVENING
LocationBRITISH BASE
Cast

The mechanics and pilots are playing football. It’s one of the rare carefree moments here.

Supporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 040 • p.19

EXT. GERMAN AIRBASE - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationGERMAN AIRBASE
CastJurgen

The German mechanics and pilots are also playing football (there’s not much else to do our here in the middle of the desert). Jurgen scores.

Desert exteriorSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 041 • p.19

EXT. RED SEA - DAWN

TypeEXT
TimeDAWN
LocationRED SEA
Cast

The sun rises over the desert saturating the land with a warm light. The camera rises to take in the Red Sea coastline and a tiny speck that is the SS Jarrow - sailing North.

Marine / ship workDesert exterior
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 042 • p.19

EXT. GERMAN AIRBASE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationGERMAN AIRBASE
CastJurgen, Tomas

The Heinkel 111 crew head out towards the waiting bomber. Jurgen, wearing his leather flying jacket, hurries out and falls into step beside the bomber pilot.

Desert exteriorAircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesHeinkel bomber
Scene 043 • p.20

EXT. BRITISH BASE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationBRITISH BASE
Cast

The British fighter pilots are playing cards outside the mess tent. They have all their kit next to them.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesSpitfires
Scene 044 • p.20

EXT. GERMAN AIRBASE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationGERMAN AIRBASE
Cast

The Heinkel bomber is already in the air. One by one the Messerschmidt 109s take off.

Desert exteriorAircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fire
Key budget cuesMesserschmidtsHeinkel bomber
Scene 045 • p.21

INT. MESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationMESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT
CastJurgen

Jurgen pulls back on the stick and the fighter starts an almost vertical climb. He glances back to see the other seven planes (including the two older models that were brought out of the hangar yesterday) following in perfect formation.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesMesserschmidts
Scene 046 • p.21

EXT. BRITISH BASE - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationBRITISH BASE
CastRay

The wing of seven Spitfires are also in the air. Ray is leading them towards the Red Sea.

Marine / ship workAircraft / aerial sequence
Key budget cuesSpitfires
Scene 047 • p.21

EXT. SS JARROW - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW
Cast

The crew of the cargo ship are very aware that they’re entering hostile waters. The hatches are being battened down.

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weapons
Scene 048 • p.21

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationKITCHEN
CastNeal, Rob

Neal and Rob are washing up a giant pile of dishes after the crew’s breakfast. Just because you hate washing up.

Marine / ship workWeapons / armamentsSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 049 • p.23

EXT. SKIES - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSKIES
Cast

Close on the Heinkel... flying at 20,000 feet.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesMesserschmidtsHeinkel bomber
Scene 050 • p.23

INT. SPITFIRE COCKPIT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationSPITFIRE COCKPIT
CastRay

Ray scans the skies - above and below them - sees nothing. Suddenly the radio crackles into live.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesSpitfires
Scene 051 • p.24

INT. MESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationMESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT
CastJurgen

Jurgen spots the six Spitfires climbing towards them. Here they come.

Water / underwater workAircraft / aerial sequence
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidts
Scene 052 • p.24

EXT. SKIES - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSKIES
CastJurgen

The Messerschmidts fan out as they dive. The Spitfires also break formation.

Water / underwater workAircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidtsHeinkel bomberAA gun / weapons
Scene 053 • p.24

INT. BOMBER COCKPIT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationBOMBER COCKPIT
Cast

The bomber pilot gets the message and immediately pushes the stick forward - taking the bomber into a steep dive.

Water / underwater workAircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesHeinkel bomber
Scene 054 • p.24

EXT. SS JARROW - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW
CastFirst Officer

The first officer on the ship’s bridge is staring up at the sky through a huge pair of binoculars. He sees the bomber.

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesHeinkel bomberCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 055 • p.25

INT. SPITFIRE COCKPIT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSPITFIRE COCKPIT
CastRay

Ray is managing to evade a Messerschmidt that is trying to get on his tail. He sees the bomber diving towards the Red Sea.

Marine / ship workAircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidtsHeinkel bomber
Scene 056 • p.25

INT. MESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationMESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT
CastRay, Jurgen

Jurgen rolls in behind another Spitfire... His thumb is on the firing button.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fire
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidtsHeinkel bomber
Scene 057 • p.25

EXT. SS JARROW - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW
Cast

Both ‘Ack Ack’ guns are firing in the direction of the approaching bomber. The air above the ship is filled with puffs of black smoke.

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armaments
Key budget cuesHeinkel bomberCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 058 • p.25

EXT. SKIES - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSKIES
CastRay, Jurgen

Jurgen pulls off a spectacular acrobatic move - using an inverted loop to get himself onto the tail of Ray’s Spitfire. He opens fire.

Aircraft / aerial sequence
Key budget cuesSpitfires
Scene 059 • p.26

INT. SPITFIRE COCKPIT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSPITFIRE COCKPIT
CastRay

The glass cockpit canopy shatters around Ray... More bullets stitch a line across the underside of one wing.

Aircraft / aerial sequence
Key budget cuesSpitfires
Scene 060 • p.26

INT. BOMBER COCKPIT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationBOMBER COCKPIT
Cast

The bomber pilot drops the bombs.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceFX / explosions / fireSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesHeinkel bomber
Scene 061 • p.26

EXT. SKIES - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSKIES
Cast

We follow three bombs as they plummet downwards towards the SS Jarrow. Two miss...

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fire
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 062 • p.26

INT. KITCHEN - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationKITCHEN
CastNeal, Rob

The explosion literally lifts the huge ship several feet in the air and drops it back down. The effect, inside the kitchen, is to hurl everything that isn’t bolted down...

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fireStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 063 • p.27

EXT. SS JARROW - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW
Cast

There’s frantic activity on the main deck of the ship. The dozen or so crew members are trying to put out fires that are breaking out all over the ship.

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 064 • p.27

EXT. SKIES - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSKIES
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray’s plane is in trouble. He’s losing height fast...

Key budget cues
Scene 065 • p.27

INT. SS JARROW - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW
Cast

The ship’s first officer has gone below to inspect the bomb damage. He opens a bulkhead door that leads into the engine room.

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fireSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 066 • p.27

INT. KITCHEN - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationKITCHEN
Cast

The movement of the ship was so extreme that one of the huge industrial fridges has toppled over. It is now lying on its side - directly in front of the store room door.

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 067 • p.27

EXT. SS JARROW - BRIDGE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW - BRIDGE
CastFirst Officer, Captain

The first officer races back onto the bridge. It’s bad.

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 068 • p.28

INT. SPITFIRE COCKPIT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSPITFIRE COCKPIT
CastRay, Jurgen

Jurgen is again closing in on Ray’s Spitfire. It won’t be long now.

Aircraft / aerial sequence
Key budget cuesSpitfires
Scene 069 • p.28

INT. MESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationMESSERSCHMIDT COCKPIT
CastRay, Jurgen

Jurgen has Ray in his gun sights. As he fires his 20mm canons Ray makes an unexpected move.

Aircraft / aerial sequenceWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesSpitfiresMesserschmidts
Scene 070 • p.29

EXT. SKIES - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSKIES
Cast

Wide shot as two parachutes open. Both pilots are going down in the sea.

Marine / ship workStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 071 • p.29

INT. STORE ROOM - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSTORE ROOM
CastNeal, Rob, Help.

Neal and Rob are trying to exit the store room... but the fallen fridge is blocking their exit.

Key budget cues
Scene 072 • p.29

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationKITCHEN
Cast

The officer charged with rounding up survivors enters the kitchen. He looks around at the deserted, debris strewn, room.

Marine / ship workDesert exteriorFX / explosions / fireSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 073 • p.30

INT. STORE ROOM - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationSTORE ROOM
CastNeal, Rob

The last jolt has toppled the shelves in the store room.. Neal and Rob work together to lift a tall unit away from the door.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 074 • p.30

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray and Jurgen have landed in the water. Both are battered and bruised - but are not suffering from any serious injuries.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 075 • p.30

EXT. SS JARROW - DECK - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW - DECK
Cast

The two life boats have been lowered. The survivors - about ten of them in total - climb into the boats.

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 076 • p.30

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
CastRay

Ray can see the lifeboats setting out. He waves and yells frantically.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 077 • p.30

EXT. LIFEBOAT - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationLIFEBOAT
CastRay

The captain scans the sea around his stricken ship. There’s various kinds of wreckage that has fallen overboard during the attack - including barrels and wooden crates.

Marine / ship workStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 078 • p.31

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
CastRay, Jurgen

Jurgen watches the lifeboats disappear into the distance. He turns through three hundred and sixty degrees...

Marine / ship workWater / underwater work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 079 • p.31

EXT. SS JARROW - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW
CastJurgen

Jurgen makes it across to the ship. It’s now listing to starboard...

Marine / ship workWater / underwater work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 080 • p.31

EXT. SS JARROW - BOW - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW - BOW
CastRay

Ray approached the boat from a different angle. He has arrived at the bow.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workFX / explosions / fire
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 081 • p.32

INT. ENGINE ROOM - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationENGINE ROOM
CastRay, First Officer

Ray find himself floating in the flooded engine room. The influx of water - now about six feet deep - has put out most of the fires...

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 082 • p.32

EXT. SS JARROW - DECK - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW - DECK
CastJurgen

Jurgen is lying flat on his back on the foredeck - clearly exhausted. He takes a deep breath and sits up.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 083 • p.32

into his tunic and produces a black Luger.

Type
Time
Locationinto his tunic and produces a black Luger.
Cast

He rises to his feet.

Weapons / armaments
Key budget cuesAA gun / weapons
Scene 084 • p.32

INT. BELOW DECKS - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationBELOW DECKS
CastRay

Ray closes the bulkhead door that leads into the rapidly flooding engine room. He heads up two flights of metal steps and down a long passageway.

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 085 • p.32

INT. STORE ROOM - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSTORE ROOM
CastNeal, Rob, Help.

Neal and Rob have cleared a space on the floor of the store room. Both are lying down on the hard metal floor.

Key budget cues
Scene 086 • p.33

INT. MESS HALL - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationMESS HALL
CastRay

Ray has passed through the devastated kitchen and is in the mess hall. He can’t hear the banging from in here.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cues
Scene 087 • p.33

EXT. FOREDECK - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationFOREDECK
CastRay, Jurgen, Click.

Ray steps out onto the deck. Jurgen is already there.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weapons
Scene 088 • p.34

INT. SS JARROW - BRIDGE - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW - BRIDGE
CastRay

Ray makes it onto the bridge... keeping his head low in case his enemy can fire at him.

Marine / ship workWeapons / armaments
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weapons
Scene 089 • p.35

EXT. FOREDECK - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationFOREDECK
CastJurgen

Jurgen hesitates on the way to the bridge. He has a nasty looking knife in his hand...

Marine / ship workWeapons / armaments
Key budget cues
Scene 090 • p.35

INT. SS JARROW - BRIDGE - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationSS JARROW - BRIDGE
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray peers gingerly out of the windows that overlook the foredeck and bow of the ship. To his surprise there’s no sign of the Luftwaffe pilot.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weapons
Scene 091 • p.35

EXT. ANTI AIRCRAFT GUN - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationANTI AIRCRAFT GUN
CastRay, Jurgen

The gunner we saw earlier is dead and lying on his back on the deck. Jurgen has taken his place and has swung the huge gun around to face the ship’s bridge.

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weapons
Scene 092 • p.36

INT. SS JARROW - BRIDGE - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationSS JARROW - BRIDGE
CastRay

For Ray, on the receiving end, the noise is even more ear piercing. The huge ‘Ack Ack’ shells slam straight through the glass...

Marine / ship workWeapons / armamentsSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weapons
Scene 093 • p.36

EXT. ANTI AIRCRAFT GUN - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationANTI AIRCRAFT GUN
CastJurgen

Jurgen fires the last bullet in the belt that was already loaded when he arrived. Beside him there is a large metal ammo case.

FX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesAA gun / weapons
Scene 094 • p.36

INT. SS JARROW - BRIDGE - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW - BRIDGE
CastRay, Jurgen

Now that the gun has stopped firing Ray takes the opportunity to look up. Through the smashed window he can see Jurgen reloading.

Marine / ship workWeapons / armaments
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weapons
Scene 095 • p.36

EXT. ANTI AIRCRAFT GUN - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationANTI AIRCRAFT GUN
CastRay, Jurgen

Jurgen looks up to see Ray in the window - pointing the flare gun at him. Ray fires.

Water / underwater workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreographyPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesAA gun / weapons
Scene 096 • p.37

EXT. FOREDECK - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationFOREDECK
CastRay, Jurgen, Boom.

Ray races down the steps and onto the foredeck with the fire axe in his hands. Jurgen is still scrabbling away from the anti aircraft gun when he reaches him.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesAA gun / weapons
Scene 097 • p.38

EXT. FOREDECK - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationFOREDECK
CastRay, Jurgen

We’re still in Jurgen’s POV as the world swims back into focus. He’s not dead (obviously) but he has been securely tied to the side railing.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesAA gun / weapons
Scene 098 • p.38

INT. BELOW DECKS - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationBELOW DECKS
CastRay

Ray is searching for survivors below decks. There are bodies down here...

Supporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 099 • p.38

INT. KITCHEN - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationKITCHEN
CastRay

Ray passes through the kitchen. He stops.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cues
Scene 100 • p.38

INT. STORE ROOM - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationSTORE ROOM
CastNeal, Rob

Neal and Rob are still shouting and banging tin cans against the metal walls... but with less conviction now.

Key budget cues
Scene 101 • p.38

INT. KITCHEN - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationKITCHEN
CastRay, Rob (O.S.), Neal (O.S.)

Ray is banging on the store room door. Is there someone in there?

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fire
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 102 • p.39

INT. STORE ROOM - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSTORE ROOM
CastRay, Neal, Rob

Ray and Neal are frantic. They both hammer as hard as they can on the metal walls...

Marine / ship work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 103 • p.40

INT. KITCHEN - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationKITCHEN
CastRay, Jurgen

The floor is at a 45 degree angle as Ray exits the kitchen. He looks out to sea.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 104 • p.40

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
CastRay, Jurgen

Wide overhead shot as the ship reaches 90 degrees.... Then drops over.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 105 • p.40

EXT. HULL - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray and Jurgen clamber onto the hull of the boat - using a fixed maintenance ladder next to the twin screws in the stern. They both collapse on their backs - utterly exhausted.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 106 • p.43

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
CastRay, Jurgen

An underwater shot in the crystal clear waters of the Red Sea. Jurgen and Ray dive down about fifteen feet...

Marine / ship workWater / underwater work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 107 • p.43

EXT. FOREDECK - UPSIDE DOWN - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationFOREDECK - UPSIDE DOWN
CastRay, Jurgen

What was the deck is now the ceiling. There’s a gap of about two feet between what used to be the deck and the water level.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 108 • p.44

INT. KITCHEN - UPSIDE DOWN - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationKITCHEN - UPSIDE DOWN
CastRay, Jurgen

Jurgen and Ray make their way into the kitchen. They are now walking on what was the ceiling - so the hanging lights are lying on the floor surrounded by a tangle of wires.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 109 • p.44

INT. STORE ROOM - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationSTORE ROOM
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal, Rob

The wave of relief that washes over Rob and Neal when the door opens is seismic. They’d given up long ago...

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 110 • p.46

EXT. FOREDECK - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationFOREDECK
CastBang

Close on the body of the anti aircraft gunner who we saw lying dead on the deck. When the ship rolled his body floated clear and he’s now rising slowly - very slowly - towards the surface.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workFX / explosions / fireWeapons / armamentsAnimal / sharkPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsAA gun / weaponsShark
Scene 111 • p.46

EXT. FOREDECK - UPSIDE DOWN - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationFOREDECK - UPSIDE DOWN
CastRay, Neal, Rob

All four men jump into the water. All of them are now in the two foot pocket of air beneath what used to be the deck.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 112 • p.47

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
CastRay, Jurgen

Another shot beneath the water as they all swim over - i.e. under - the side rail and up to the surface.

Water / underwater work
Key budget cuesJerry cans / supplies
Scene 113 • p.47

EXT. HULL - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal, Rob

All four of them pop up next to the overturned ship. Both Rob and Neal take huge relieved breaths.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 114 • p.47

EXT. UNDERWATER - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationUNDERWATER
Cast

SHARK POV. A view from below of the four men swimming towards the stern of the boat.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / sharkSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsShark
Scene 115 • p.47

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal, Rob

As they swim towards the access ladder Neal spots a fin - slicing through the water towards them. It’s a shark.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 116 • p.48

EXT. HULL - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal, Rob

Ray climbs onto the hull to find Rob in bad shape. His leg is mangled and he’s slipping in and out of consciousness.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / sharkPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 117 • p.50

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
CastRay

Another underwater shot as Ray dives from the hull... He swims down a few feet and disappears through the large hole in the hull made by the German bomb.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workFX / explosions / fireStunts / action choreography
Key budget cues
Scene 118 • p.50

INT. ENGINE ROOM - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationENGINE ROOM
CastRay

The engine room is now almost completely flooded. There’s a tiny space close to the roof - just a couple of inches of trapped air.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesShark
Scene 119 • p.51

EXT. HULL - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationHULL
CastJurgen, Neal, Rob

Breaking the pressure seal and partly flooding the corridor leading from the engine room... causes the whole ship to sink another foot.

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 120 • p.53

INT. SS JARROW - PASSAGEWAY - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW - PASSAGEWAY
CastRay

Ray makes his way down the part flooded passageway. He sees a set of steps that used to go down...

Water / underwater work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 121 • p.53

INT. SS JARROW - HOLD - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSS JARROW - HOLD
CastRay

Since the hold is the lowest part of the ship there’s no water in here. But when the ship turned over everything fell and the floor (that used to be the ceiling) is covered in debris.

Marine / ship workWeapons / armaments
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsMotorcycles / vehiclesJerry cans / supplies
Scene 122 • p.53

EXT. HULL - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationHULL
CastJurgen, Neal, Rob

Neal has followed Jurgen’s instructions and has managed to snag several pieces of wood from around the overturned boat. He’s now using one of them to guide a floating metal barrel towards the access ladder.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 123 • p.55

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
CastRay

Ray can’t go back through the bulkhead doors to the engine room. He heads down the steps to the now fully flooded foredeck.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 124 • p.55

EXT. RED SEA SURFACE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA SURFACE
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal, Rob

Ray breaks the surface of the water. The tents he brought are just about floating...

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / sharkStunts / action choreography
Key budget cuesJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 125 • p.56

into the canvas which closes around its body.

Type
Time
Locationinto the canvas which closes around its body.
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray swims as fast as he can towards the access ladder. The confused and temporarily blinded shark veers away.

Water / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesShark
Scene 126 • p.57

EXT. HULL - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal

Ray is lying flat on his back on the upturned hull... exhausted.

Marine / ship workFX / explosions / fireAnimal / sharkPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 127 • p.60

EXT. HULL - EVENING

TypeEXT
TimeEVENING
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal, Rob

As the sun slowly sets we see the three men working together to bring more ‘debris’ onto the upturned hull. The wood from splintered packing crates has all floated to the surface and they collect the longest pieces.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workDesert exteriorAnimal / sharkSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 128 • p.63

EXT. UNDERWATER - EVENING

TypeEXT
TimeEVENING
LocationUNDERWATER
CastRob

Rob’s body floats for a moment... then sinks slowly towards the dark depths.

Water / underwater workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 129 • p.63

EXT. HULL - NIGHT

TypeEXT
TimeNIGHT
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal

Neal is snoring. Ray and Jurgen, lying on the second army tent, are finding it hard to fall asleep.

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 130 • p.65

EXT. RED SEA - NIGHT

TypeEXT
TimeNIGHT
LocationRED SEA
Cast

An orange glow beyond the horizon heralds the beginning of a new day.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cues
Scene 131 • p.65

EXT. HULL - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal, Rob

The overturned ship has sunk several feet overnight. The black metal hull is only about thirty inches above the water line.

Marine / ship workAnimal / sharkStunts / action choreographyPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 132 • p.67

EXT. HULL - DAWN

TypeEXT
TimeDAWN
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal, Rob

Close on a piece of wood as it’s split down the middle. Pull back to Jurgen.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / sharkSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 133 • p.69

EXT. RAFT - EARLY MORNING

TypeEXT
TimeEARLY MORNING
LocationRAFT
CastNeal

Neal paddles hard to put some distance between himself and the hull of the overturned SS Jarrow. Cut to close on his hand.

Marine / ship workPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 134 • p.69

EXT. UNDERWATER - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationUNDERWATER
Cast

SHARK POV. The tiger shark is moving in long lazy circles around the overturned boat.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsShark
Scene 135 • p.70

EXT. HULL - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal

Ray and Jurgen watch the raft move away. It’s nearly a hundred meters away now.

Marine / ship workSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesJerry cans / supplies
Scene 136 • p.70

EXT. RAFT - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationRAFT
CastNeal

Neal looks around. Doesn’t see anything.

Animal / sharkSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 137 • p.71

EXT. HULL - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationHULL
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal

Ray and Jurgen watch as Neal is torn apart. The raft is overturned.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 138 • p.72

into trouble the other can help.

Type
Time
Locationinto trouble the other can help.
CastJurgen

Jurgen nods. He’s good with that.

Key budget cues
Scene 139 • p.72

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
Cast

An endless and spectacular vista of ocean. The overturned hull of the SS Jarrow is a tiny speck in the sheer scale of the image.

Marine / ship work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 140 • p.72

EXT. HULL - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationHULL
CastRay

Only a small patch of the hull remains visible... and it’s less than a foot above the water line.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 141 • p.73

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
Cast

The hole in the bow of the boat is deeper now... but they both make it easily and quickly.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsShark
Scene 142 • p.73

INT. ENGINE ROOM - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationENGINE ROOM
CastRay

The upside down engine room is completely flooded. The air pocket that Ray used last time (up by the ‘roof’) has gone.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 143 • p.73

INT. FLOODED HOLD - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationFLOODED HOLD
CastRay, Jurgen

The hold is now flooded. All the pieces of wood as well as the tarpaulins and tents are floating freely in the water.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / sharkSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesMotorcycles / vehiclesJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 144 • p.74

INT. FLOODED CORRIDOR - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationFLOODED CORRIDOR
CastNeal, Rob

They swim down the flooded corridor... through and open bulkhead door...

Marine / ship workWater / underwater work
Key budget cues
Scene 145 • p.75

INT. STORE ROOM - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationSTORE ROOM
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray picks up a Jerry can of fresh water... Jurgen grabs an arm full of cans and jars.

Key budget cuesJerry cans / supplies
Scene 146 • p.75

INT. FLOODED KITCHEN - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationFLOODED KITCHEN
CastRay, Jurgen

As they enter the kitchen Ray glances back down the flooded corridor. There is a dark shape moving towards them.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAnimal / sharkSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 147 • p.76

INT. FLOODED KITCHEN - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationFLOODED KITCHEN
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray hangs onto the jerry can and swims back to Jurgen. He grabs him around the waist and pulls him out through the flooded kitchen, up the overturned steps and out onto what was the foredeck.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater work
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboatsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 148 • p.76

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray and Jurgen surface in the middle of an endless expanse of sea. The hull of the SS Jarrow has vanished beneath the surface.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 149 • p.76

EXT. RAFT - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRAFT
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray puts the Jerry can of precious fresh water onto the top of the raft. He then climbs on board and hauls the unconscious Jurgen on with him.

Water / underwater workSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesJerry cans / supplies
Scene 150 • p.77

EXT. RAFT - MINUTES LATER

TypeEXT
TimeMINUTES LATER
LocationRAFT
CastRay, Jurgen

Jurgen is recovering. He manages to prop himself up on one elbow.

Period wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 151 • p.78

EXT. RAFT - LATER

TypeEXT
TimeLATER
LocationRAFT
CastRay, Jurgen

Both are paddling. There is still no sign of land in any direction.

Marine / ship workStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 152 • p.80

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal, Rob

Ray and Jurgen have stopped paddling and are eating from the cans that Neal and Rob brought on their first trip. How far do you think we’re come?

Marine / ship workDesert exterior
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 153 • p.81

EXT. RED SEA - NIGHT

TypeEXT
TimeNIGHT
LocationRED SEA
CastRay, Jurgen

It’s night and the sky is full of stars. Both men are lying on the raft.

Marine / ship workStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 154 • p.83

EXT. RED SEA - DAWN

TypeEXT
TimeDAWN
LocationRED SEA
Cast

There’s a glow behind the horizon as the sun prepares to rise. In the foreground we see the tiny speck that is the makeshift raft carrying our two protagonists.

Marine / ship workPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 155 • p.83

EXT. BRITISH BASE - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationBRITISH BASE
CastRay

The commanding officer who we last saw speaking to Ray... heads into the ‘chapel tent’ carrying a cardboard box.

Supporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 156 • p.83

INT. TENT - SAME TIME

TypeINT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationTENT
CastRay

The commanding officer places the box on top of the growing pile. Like the others this one has the photograph of the deceased pilot on the front.

Supporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 157 • p.83

EXT. GERMAN AIRBASE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationGERMAN AIRBASE
CastJurgen, Kommandant, Christian

The oily Kommandant is back behind his desk. Standing in front of him is Jurgen’s replacement as Obersleutnant (the Luftwaffe equivalent of Wing Commander).

Marine / ship workDesert exteriorWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesCargo ship / lifeboats
Scene 158 • p.85

EXT. RAFT - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRAFT
CastRay, Jurgen

Jurgen and Ray are paddling hard... but still appear to be in the middle of nowhere.

Desert exteriorAircraft / aerial sequenceWeapons / armamentsPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesMesserschmidtsAA gun / weaponsJerry cans / supplies
Scene 159 • p.86

EXT. RED SEA - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRED SEA
CastRay, Jurgen

The shore line is getting nearer as Jurgen and Ray keep on paddling. She was at secretarial college when we first met.

Marine / ship workWater / underwater workAircraft / aerial sequenceWeapons / armamentsStunts / action choreographyPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesMesserschmidtsAA gun / weapons
Scene 160 • p.87

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
CastJurgen

A shot from underwater of the two men swimming down. Cut to the bullets hitting the water...

Water / underwater workSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesJerry cans / supplies
Scene 161 • p.87

EXT. RAFT - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRAFT
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray bursts to the surface... Climbs onto the raft.

Water / underwater workSupporting cast / extrasPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 162 • p.88

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
CastJurgen

The cloud of blood from Jurgen’s wound dissipated quickly. But tiny drops remain in the water.

Water / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesShark
Scene 163 • p.88

EXT. RAFT - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationRAFT
CastRay, Jurgen, Neal

Ray is paddling. Jurgen is lying on the now ‘off kilter’ row of barrels.

Water / underwater workAnimal / sharkPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cuesJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 164 • p.91

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
CastRay, Jurgen

From beneath the surface we see the metal barrels scraping over the sharp coral. The waves start to get more powerful...

Water / underwater workSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesJerry cans / supplies
Scene 165 • p.91

EXT. REEF - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationREEF
CastRay, Jurgen

They finally make it into the calm water beyond the reef. The shore is just thirty meters ahead.

Marine / ship workAnimal / sharkSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesJerry cans / suppliesShark
Scene 166 • p.92

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
CastJurgen

The shark is heading straight for Jurgen. It’s mouth opens it’s eyes roll back.

Water / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesShark
Scene 167 • p.92

EXT. LAGOON - SAME TIME

TypeEXT
TimeSAME TIME
LocationLAGOON
CastJurgen

Jurgen launches himself towards the shark. It sinks its teeth into his leg.

Animal / shark
Key budget cuesShark
Scene 168 • p.92

EXT. LAGOON - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationLAGOON
CastRay, Jurgen, Noooo...

Ray watches as Jurgen and the shark sink together beneath the surface.

Water / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesShark
Scene 169 • p.92

EXT. UNDERWATER - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationUNDERWATER
CastJurgen

Jurgen and the shark sink towards the bottom of the lagoon... both mortally wounded.

Water / underwater workAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesShark
Scene 170 • p.92

EXT. SHORELINE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSHORELINE
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray washes up on the shore... He stumbles forward onto the sand.

Desert exteriorAnimal / shark
Key budget cuesShark
Scene 171 • p.93

EXT. BEACH - DUSK

TypeEXT
TimeDUSK
LocationBEACH
CastRay

Ray is collecting driftwood from the shoreline... He’s making a bonfire on the sand.

Desert exteriorFX / explosions / fire
Key budget cues
Scene 172 • p.93

EXT. DESERT - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationDESERT
CastRay

Ray heads into the desert. In the magical dawn light it’s spectacular....

Desert exterior
Key budget cues
Scene 173 • p.94

EXT. DESERT - LATER

TypeEXT
TimeLATER
LocationDESERT
CastRay

Ray is walking uphill through a sandstorm. Visibility is down to just a few inches in front of his face.

Desert exterior
Key budget cues
Scene 174 • p.94

EXT. DESERT - EVENING

TypeEXT
TimeEVENING
LocationDESERT
CastRay

We’re in Ray’s POV as he wakes. The storm is abating...

Water / underwater workDesert exteriorStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 175 • p.94

INT. BEDOUIN TENT - NIGHT

TypeINT
TimeNIGHT
LocationBEDOUIN TENT
CastRay, Bedouin Tribesman

Ray wakes in a Bedouin tent. One of the men we saw riding a camel is crouching down next to him.

Supporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 176 • p.95

EXT. DESERT - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationDESERT
CastRay

Ray is riding with the Bedouin across a vast swathe of desert. They crest a hill...

Desert exterior
Key budget cues
Scene 177 • p.95

EXT. ROAD - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationROAD
CastRay

Ray is bidding his saviors a formal but sincere farewell. He bows his head as he shakes their hands.

Key budget cues
Scene 178 • p.96

EXT. ENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationENGLISH COUNTRYSIDE
CastRay, Pamela

Wide shot of a small picturesque English country village. Ray, wearing new clothes and sporting a new beard, heads through a gate and up to the front door of a small cottage.

Desert exteriorSupporting cast / extras
Key budget cues
Scene 179 • p.97

EXT. SCHOOL - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationSCHOOL
CastRay, Pamela, Catherine, Daddy.

A five year old girl (CATHERINE) - wearing a school uniform and pigtails - freezes when she sees both her parents. Daddy?

Marine / ship workPeriod wardrobe / props
Key budget cues
Scene 180 • p.98

EXT. NEWSREEL FOOTAGE - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationNEWSREEL FOOTAGE
CastRay, Catherine, Pamela

The war is finally over and there are VE day parties all over the country. People of all ages are celebrating on the streets of London, Manchester, Edinburgh, Newcastle....

Key budget cues
Scene 181 • p.98

INT. HOUSE - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationHOUSE
CastRay, Catherine, Pamela

Ray hugs Catherine... then his wife.

Key budget cues
Scene 182 • p.98

EXT. AIRFIELD - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationAIRFIELD
CastRay

Ray boards a military cargo plane.

Key budget cues
Scene 183 • p.98

EXT. BERLIN - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationBERLIN
CastRay

Ray is in the back of a battered taxi driving through a city in ruins. Not a single building is undamaged.

Key budget cues
Scene 184 • p.98

EXT. BERLIN OUTSKIRTS - DAY

TypeEXT
TimeDAY
LocationBERLIN OUTSKIRTS
CastRay

The taxi passes through a pair of iron gates that are hanging off their hinges... then proceeds down a long gravel driveway to an impressive country house.

Key budget cues
Scene 185 • p.99

INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY

TypeINT
TimeDAY
LocationLIVING ROOM
CastRay, Jurgen

Ray enters the living room. It’s a scene of devastation.

Marine / ship workAircraft / aerial sequenceStunts / action choreographySupporting cast / extras
Key budget cuesSpitfires